Reviews for The Straw That Broke The Thestral's Back
TheBlackRose55 5/12/13 . chapter 2
Damn this was awesome! Continue!
geetac 3/12/13 . chapter 2
I enjoyed reading the chapters so far and think it's great!
DarkStar Streak 11/26/12 . chapter 2
I loves it, sir. Once I picked it up I couldn't stop reading, sir! Continue oh, do continue.
Darknessthorn 11/16/12 . chapter 1
he you going to update soon riiiiight ...please
kanakoyuki 8/14/12 . chapter 2
wonderful epic...the plot is completely stunning...the relationship between snape and malfoy really intriguing including voldermort... it would be interesting if they get intimating and jolly well together ...i hope to see more bashing situation cause is quite comedy and hilarious to see they struggle their best to make harry potter change his opinion and feeling about them ...also it would be more interesting if riddle, snape, and malfoy all out try to wooing or court him, harry...it would a blast..hope to see more update...well then..ociaossu
Saturnblue 7/4/11 . chapter 2
I'm guessing both Lucius and Voldemort view Harry as a adult since he did face them without fear or much of it unlike normal children. Even though Harry is underage I wonder will they still make those things happen for Harry or wait until he is physically 16 years old. "Old enough to kill will be old enough to do sexual things" this saying hold true in this story.

Dumbledore and Staff should of visit Harry early on not wait until now after the confession. Snape should able to see through the abuse if he didn't only wanted to see what he believe to be true instead of seeing with his eyes wide open to see the truth beneath the mask. As for the rest if they don't know what abuse is like then none of them will spot it head on. They could still spot it if look closely and not only seeing his parents within him.

The student body is fickle like the mass. They only wanted to believe their fellow wizard and witch not the supposed hero in their mist. They don't know how cruel it is to their supposed hero. Their supposed hero IS one of them there is not much difference except he may survived something that no one had it doesn't make this person perfect in every way.

I wonder if the staff or the mass realize that by excluding one of their student who is special in some way or survived a killing curse will eventually make them loose their only chance at redemption. It's like history is repeat itself again with their actions toward someone innocent. By doing this exclusion or treat this person differently than the rest only apply resentment, jealousy, and bunch of negative energy in the mist. It's like he is a tool to use and throw away doesn't matter if he is a person or not. Too them he is nothing but a tool that can be manipulated or mold without consequences. (All of them looking after their own skins and doesn't matter who they drag it down to be beneath them for them to feel satisfied or confident.)

What type of adults automatically believe someone without proof and wanted to chuck this person who is a 13 YEARS OLD CHILD into prison MEANT for REAL CRIMINAL ADULTS without a ounce of regret and wanted this person to forgive them by farther manipulation. Really, that doesn't make things alright or completely forgivable. That only show distrust and cruelty. In this old culture that hadn't moved for more than a century only let power run over it's head and no justice to sever the wicket yet let the innocent suffer.

Good thing Harry have a good mind and willing to use it and not let them push him over with the manipulations by doing something unexpected. Glad the twins willing to stand up for Harry and not believe in their so called family member completely. It showed they care for Harry himself not his fame or anything do with popularity. Ron and hermione completely believe over someone younger/family then believe in someone they had come to known. It seem to me they do not really care for Harry as they claimed to be. If they claimed to be his best friends won't they try to believe in their best friend and willing to be open minded then ask for evidence of the truth of the matter not automatically believe someone one of them hardly known.
promiscuous boi 9/26/10 . chapter 2
*Blinks* Damn. Um. Wow. promiscuous little 12 year old, ain't he? Moves a little fast, but i like the plot. Can't wait to read more.
7th Hells Angel 5/8/10 . chapter 2
I love this story! I am so happy to see that you are back. This is a great story and so is CRIMSON REGRET and Two Sides to Every Coin. I look forward to reading the new chapter when you update. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter! _
slytherintriumvirate 5/6/10 . chapter 2
cute story :)
Smurfanator 5/4/10 . chapter 2
This is a really lovely story! I hope you keep writing it!
jbfritz 4/21/10 . chapter 2
Great start!
xX-MissBoofzilla-Xx 4/19/10 . chapter 2
i LIKE HOW POWERFUL HARRY IS! So COOL!
SeverusDmitri18 4/19/10 . chapter 2
Wow. That was awesome! So who's Harry going to be paired up yet?

Maybe Mr. Johnathon Zabini? And perhaps a threesome?

JZ/HP/Lucius Malfoy?
dancefreak896 4/19/10 . chapter 2
Great Story. PLease update soon!
Deby Magid 4/19/10 . chapter 2
I think its a good start. just that Harry learned erthing to fast. but I liked anyway.

update soon
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