Soooo goooddd! Plz continue i'd love to see Shego's reaction to what Ron did;as well as Kim's mom's reaction!

I have to say, I am intrigued at what will happen next... though one thing bothered me - how you try to find different ways to call people (the blonde, the male, the karate trained...). It ruins the flow of the story in my opinion - and it's just confusing :/

Doing it once in a while is fine, even recommended, but try not to overuse it and just use their name fore once.

Also, try instead of writing (BREAK) or (LATER THAT DAY) you could put it in as part of the sentence (Later that day Ron did..., Back in Dr. Drakken's lair...)

Sorry if I was too harsh. :) Love your story!

I'm really enjoying this! Although I do struggle to envision Ron capable of cheating on Kim like that, I'll suspend my disbelief for the sake of some Kigo ;) hehe. And you do justify it in a sense, with the fact that Ron's travelled from loser-status to having girls drooling over him. It is indeed difficult to resist that sort of temptation when you've never experienced it before.

One thing, however- is it really necessary for you to write an author's note summarising every chapter right after the chapter itself as though it's an episode of Desperate Housewives? :P I mean, we have all just read the darn thing!

Haha, but anyway, your writing's been good so far and the story definitely has potential. I'll look forward to seeing what happens next.

Amazing tbh I really want to see more f these please!

Liking this idea alot... and now I have the image of Kim being the aggressor with Shego to get "revenge sex" stuck in my head...

I love this story and hope that Ron gets eitheer Impaled, fed to Sharks (alive), or thurouly imparessed publicly. I can't wait for your next chapter!

Jason

Pls pls pls update soon!

Hey how's it going Heart of a Wolf?

Listen, Im absolutely loving this fic of yours.

Damn you stupid Ron, I despise you! _# . . . Sorry, Im really into your fic Lol

Anyways, please update soon!

BlackSwordsWoman!

Great Chapter! I look forward to reading the next!

Very cool. Well im glad Kim released her frustration and anger in some way. He he

I is Shego that gives Ron!

I would find it very amusing if Shego castrated Ron.

I loved this update :) and syntho Ron was lucky he was a syntho drone lmao and come on beat Ron's ass and Shego cn u go to ur kimmie pls

well this i cannot wait for. I just keep imaging over and over what's going to happen. And how Drakkens plan will crumble -AGAIN!

keep doing what your a doing cuse i really like it.

Ron is so stupid! When Kim snaps I hope she kicks his ass! Well I guess Drakken doesn't have to worry bout messing with Kim's emotions now.

I must say, your developments of the characters actions and mind is pretty clever and accurate according to the circumstances, at least from my point of view. I like it, it keeps me really interested so I hope an update is not very far in the future. By the way, what you said at the end about what usually womens do, is so true that it actually maked me laugh, that's my MO.