Wow. My eyes were glued to this chapter from start to finish! Very well written with some amusing lines that made me chuckle! A most excellent piece of writing and story-telling. A few spelling mistakes that could be cleared with proof-reading, but nothing that detracted me from the story, and the cliffie, well...! :)

Looks like things are coming together. Another good chapter.

Nice couple of chapters. I'm glad to see you're still at this. There was a pretty big lag there for a while. You're bringing things together nicely. Are we going to get a war soon? Keep it coming!

Wow! The attack scene was brutal. Good work.

One thing, though... You wrote "They're spread out approximately eight hundred kilometers from our current position." I believe it should be metres, not kilometres.

Another excellent chapter. It's obvious now that the Imperiam are not really "good guys" at all! Good work!

Nice to see this is still going. Not too sure which side to root for, though; apes and hunans working together on one side, and apes and humans forced to work together on the other. The Imperium has the technology, etc that March and Hayes are used to, but are they people that our two heroes would want to stay with? Hmmm!

Hmmm! Things are taking an unexpected turn. Good one!

Exciting chapter. I like the flow of your action narrative. Nice one.

Pretty interesting. Cant wait to see what happens next.

Not long now before the mother of all battles? Brilliant stuff!

This is getting good. tGraet Chapter. things are starting to tie together nicely. - keep it coming.

Things are beginning to develop now. The next couple of chapters should be very interesting. Nice one!

Nice chapter.

i like it! please continue

Interesting so far.