|Reviews for Always and Forever|
| KristinHazzard 1/2/11 . chapter 3
Yay! Glad you are continuing this!
| IndiaInk68 12/31/10 . chapter 3
Came across this story on The Fictionators. I really think it's very interesting and I look forward to seeing what happens next.
| kmfroggi 12/31/10 . chapter 3
huh, very interesting. im interested to see what happened to edward while away and what happened to their relationship. i know long distance is hard, so im sure that was a huge thing. great start
| Canyaceme 12/30/10 . chapter 3
Interesting. Will we see what made Edward do a complete turn around when he comes back to Forks? Looking forward to next chapter.
| Siblings-Curse 12/30/10 . chapter 3
I'm sad now...Sob!
| EmoryB123 12/29/10 . chapter 3
"How did you get in here?" I asked. "The window," he answered. "I climbed the tree outside." - What a great touch of canon there. Sweet!
"She wore that record out."
"Vinyl record. Oh my God, I forget you kids were born in the CD era." - Boy, I know just how she felt! When I think about things that today's kids know nothing about, I get a bit nostalgic.
I really like this story so far. I did not cry over The Cullens leaving (although I was close), but I think I will be crying when Edward comes back and is so mean to Bella! I am glad you promised a HEA!
| midnight-angles 12/29/10 . chapter 3
The end had me in tears it was so sad but sweet cant wait for the next chapter
| Graciie93 12/29/10 . chapter 3
Just wanna say how happy i am that you have decided to continue this into a fully fledged story :D I thought it was good, nice start with good background info :D Very interested in seeing where it all went wrong :\
| blondieja 12/29/10 . chapter 3
Very good start. I didn't read the os so I'm at a loss I think. Anyway, I can't wait to see where you take this.
| SparkleQ 12/28/10 . chapter 3
Still with you. Looking forward to your next update.
| maizeandblueinvalpo 12/28/10 . chapter 3
Anything you write I will read. Look forward to seeing where things go from here.
| lmhsfan 12/28/10 . chapter 3
I didn't review the O/S (oops) but I did put it on alert. I like where you're going and, like some, I find that Edward screwed up big time and needs to learn his lesson. However, unlike some, I don't like to dwell too much. For example, I think their time apart could probably be covered in 1-2 chapters, if not just a chapter from each of their point of views when they meet up again and have an internal monologue/summary of all that's happened since that fateful day.
I mean, how important is it, really, to see a day-to-day of them apart? And I KNOW there's got to be some drama from the day he comes back to the time of the O/S, plenty of time to cover any pertinent solo information without taking away from our Edward/Bella time. Sorry, not trying to tell you how to write your story, but those are my thoughts.
And someone mentioned not wanting them to end up together. I don't think you would do that, but I just wanted to throw my in my enthusiasm for the HEA. Angst and plot are one thing, but I get enough disappointment and "lesson learned" endings in real life, ya know? It looks to me like you set the groundwork for a truly remorseful Edward in the O/S, and I like that idea.
Want to know what I am kind of hoping will happen? Probly not, but her goes: I kind of hope he makes it up to her w/o knowing she was Ysabel first and he ends up having to choose between the two. I know that was in a movie once and I can't remember which. I know it was in one of the Batman's... Hmmm... But, in following in the tradition of Ever AFter, that won't be what happens, eh?
I know I talk too much, but whatever you do, I will love it. (As long as it's not depressing from beginning to unhappy end. Not gonna lie. lol) Really looking forward to this journey! Cinderella stories are always my favorite.
| SparkleSwan 12/28/10 . chapter 3
Well this explains a lot. I'm not sure I read the one shot originally, but this is great! ;)
| colourfulchatterbox 12/28/10 . chapter 3
I do like the way it had started...I am curious as to what changed Edward so much...will we hear from Edward soon?
| Walker77 12/28/10 . chapter 3
so exciting, cant wait to read more. i dont wanna even guess the direction this is going i want to be excited