Yay! Glad you are continuing this!

Came across this story on The Fictionators. I really think it's very interesting and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

huh, very interesting. im interested to see what happened to edward while away and what happened to their relationship. i know long distance is hard, so im sure that was a huge thing. great start

Interesting. Will we see what made Edward do a complete turn around when he comes back to Forks? Looking forward to next chapter.

I'm sad now...Sob!

"How did you get in here?" I asked. "The window," he answered. "I climbed the tree outside." - What a great touch of canon there. Sweet!

"She wore that record out."

"Record?"

"Vinyl record. Oh my God, I forget you kids were born in the CD era." - Boy, I know just how she felt! When I think about things that today's kids know nothing about, I get a bit nostalgic.

I really like this story so far. I did not cry over The Cullens leaving (although I was close), but I think I will be crying when Edward comes back and is so mean to Bella! I am glad you promised a HEA!

The end had me in tears it was so sad but sweet cant wait for the next chapter

Just wanna say how happy i am that you have decided to continue this into a fully fledged story :D I thought it was good, nice start with good background info :D Very interested in seeing where it all went wrong :\

Very good start. I didn't read the os so I'm at a loss I think. Anyway, I can't wait to see where you take this.

-Jen

Still with you. Looking forward to your next update.

Anything you write I will read. Look forward to seeing where things go from here.

I didn't review the O/S (oops) but I did put it on alert. I like where you're going and, like some, I find that Edward screwed up big time and needs to learn his lesson. However, unlike some, I don't like to dwell too much. For example, I think their time apart could probably be covered in 1-2 chapters, if not just a chapter from each of their point of views when they meet up again and have an internal monologue/summary of all that's happened since that fateful day.

I mean, how important is it, really, to see a day-to-day of them apart? And I KNOW there's got to be some drama from the day he comes back to the time of the O/S, plenty of time to cover any pertinent solo information without taking away from our Edward/Bella time. Sorry, not trying to tell you how to write your story, but those are my thoughts.

And someone mentioned not wanting them to end up together. I don't think you would do that, but I just wanted to throw my in my enthusiasm for the HEA. Angst and plot are one thing, but I get enough disappointment and "lesson learned" endings in real life, ya know? It looks to me like you set the groundwork for a truly remorseful Edward in the O/S, and I like that idea.

Want to know what I am kind of hoping will happen? Probly not, but her goes: I kind of hope he makes it up to her w/o knowing she was Ysabel first and he ends up having to choose between the two. I know that was in a movie once and I can't remember which. I know it was in one of the Batman's... Hmmm... But, in following in the tradition of Ever AFter, that won't be what happens, eh?

I know I talk too much, but whatever you do, I will love it. (As long as it's not depressing from beginning to unhappy end. Not gonna lie. lol) Really looking forward to this journey! Cinderella stories are always my favorite.

Well this explains a lot. I'm not sure I read the one shot originally, but this is great! ;)

I do like the way it had started...I am curious as to what changed Edward so much...will we hear from Edward soon?

so exciting, cant wait to read more. i dont wanna even guess the direction this is going i want to be excited