One of these days, I am going to use this as a base for my school project...

I absolutely LUV it! Your spelling and grammar and punctuation could use a little work, but, hey, ee cummings never used any of that stuff, so it depends on vision.

Very good!

Write some more!

PLEASE!

You really go into depth about Sailor Saturn, in just this short poem. It was really meaningful and although short, I really enjoyed it.

Pretty good. You can feel the grief.

okay. that was a littleconfusing! but cool anyways! i'm not one for poetry but your preety good! i,...,think? well your good by my stainderds! (can't spell, don't know anything about poetry,... why did i come here again?)well anyways, keep writing!

Cool! This was very good! _

Very interesting!

... Plesantly dark, like a good piece of chocolate. Well done.

Wow...I mean...Wow. I have no idea what to say. I never liked Sailor Saturn very much, but your poem shows her feelings, her...self. My...you're writing is beautiful, don't know what to say. Keep up the good work. You gotta let me post it. *grins* Hope to read more.

Hey, I like it. Its really good, keep whriteing.

Alicom, good work

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Cool! I've written a poem sorta like that. Maybe you wanna read...?

very deep!

I like this... its really emotional

I loved your poem! I am a fellow poet as well as a Sailor Moon fan and your work is incredible! E-mail sometime and we'll chat! Oh, and getting back to your poem... I loved your expression of emotion in it. Your prose and your style are really cool, too! :) Well, I gotta keep browsing the fanfic website! See ya!