|Reviews for To Be a Fly on the Wall|
| Marg Hammerman 3/13/13 . chapter 1
Just wanted to say I loved this chapter; it seemed so much like them, I could see the whole thing playing out (with a look of blissful rapture on my face :P). Thanks for sharing!
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 7
Wow, my compliments, you really nailed the characters! I love the way you wrote them together and Castillo was awesome!
| Dragon77 2/18/11 . chapter 7
I'm so happy that you decided to continue with this story if you ever post more chapters you know I'll be here waiting to read it.
| Dragon77 2/5/11 . chapter 5
Is this really the end if so I sad to see it end.
| Dragon77 7/22/10 . chapter 4
Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
| webbswoman 7/21/10 . chapter 4
Yay - you posted! I really do love this chapter - it all seems very natural and I think the ending is fantastic.
I think the way in which you've included the quotes works very well because it doesn't seem forced at all.
| Dragon77 5/19/10 . chapter 3
Great story I hope you write more Sonny/Rico story.
| Kerttu 4/20/10 . chapter 3
Damn! How do you do that? Get all the voices of the characters so right? Castillo really "sounds" like himself here. Good job!
Any possibility of more of this goodness?
| Kerttu 4/20/10 . chapter 2
"First there were kisses, then there were sighs..." began to ring in my mind when I read this.
| Kerttu 4/20/10 . chapter 1
Oh vow! You catch their manner of talk and character so well! This is just great! Off to read the next chapter.
| webbswoman 4/18/10 . chapter 3
I'm going to say it again. I love this. All three fit nicely together, and I think they're nice lengths. Personally, my favourite's probably the first one; it just made me smile. It's a killer ending in the third one as well, which was a good way to end the set. Well done with this, hope it gets the credit it deserves.