| Reviews for To Be a Fly on the Wall |
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Marg Hammerman 3/13/13 . chapter 1Just wanted to say I loved this chapter; it seemed so much like them, I could see the whole thing playing out (with a look of blissful rapture on my face :P). Thanks for sharing! |
Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 7 Wow, my compliments, you really nailed the characters! I love the way you wrote them together and Castillo was awesome! |
Dragon77 2/18/11 . chapter 7I'm so happy that you decided to continue with this story if you ever post more chapters you know I'll be here waiting to read it. |
Dragon77 2/5/11 . chapter 5Is this really the end if so I sad to see it end. |
Dragon77 7/22/10 . chapter 4Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. |
webbswoman 7/21/10 . chapter 4Yay - you posted! I really do love this chapter - it all seems very natural and I think the ending is fantastic. I think the way in which you've included the quotes works very well because it doesn't seem forced at all. Go you! |
Dragon77 5/19/10 . chapter 3Great story I hope you write more Sonny/Rico story. |
Kerttu 4/20/10 . chapter 3Damn! How do you do that? Get all the voices of the characters so right? Castillo really "sounds" like himself here. Good job! Any possibility of more of this goodness? |
Kerttu 4/20/10 . chapter 2"First there were kisses, then there were sighs..." began to ring in my mind when I read this. Lovely-lovely-lovely! |
Kerttu 4/20/10 . chapter 1Oh vow! You catch their manner of talk and character so well! This is just great! Off to read the next chapter. |
webbswoman 4/18/10 . chapter 3I'm going to say it again. I love this. All three fit nicely together, and I think they're nice lengths. Personally, my favourite's probably the first one; it just made me smile. It's a killer ending in the third one as well, which was a good way to end the set. Well done with this, hope it gets the credit it deserves. |