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| The Charlatan 2002-05-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseCute-in a corrupting sort of way....I liked the songfic part better than the two text chapters. The song 'Original Sin' is from The Shadow, is it not? Xelloss' hesitancy to Turn Amelia reminded me of Bram Stoker's Dracula when the Count is reluctant to allow Mina to join him in undeath. |
| Lina Inverse the Dramata 2002-03-24 ch 3, | abuseOooo Very nifty story, and I enjoyed the cuteness. Keep writing. *smile* Is chapter 3 the end? |
| K-Feldspar 2002-03-24 ch 3, | abuseOhhh... Thats soooooooo funny! You should write more! |