Cute-in a corrupting sort of way...I liked the songfic part better than the two text chapters. The song 'Original Sin' is from The Shadow, is it not? Xelloss' hesitancy to Turn Amelia reminded me of Bram Stoker's Dracula when the Count is reluctant to allow Mina to join him in undeath.

Oooo Very nifty story, and I enjoyed the cuteness. Keep writing. *smile* Is chapter 3 the end?

Ohhh... Thats soooooooo funny! You should write more!