that was weird.

Really enjoyed it - love the way you've got the girls picking up Jack's mannerisms. Would love to see more.

I like it. I was thinking not that long ago how they would deal with family members that may want to visit. Keep it up.

I know they would have been very young, but you might want to have them mention Charlie. It's a funny story, keep writing.

goooooooooodd.

:-)

Hee hee hee! That was so funny! Write more! Pretty please!

! I think that I’m going fucking crazy … it’s been a hell of a long time ago since you last updated this … please write more …

DeViL HuNtEr

hehehee...it waz ok! u sure hav some talent! try writing some more! less conversation tho! ttfn!

lol! poor jack! (laufs bhind his back)

Bad. Made no sense, even allowing for the addition of Sailor Moon.