sounds really interesting

so keep it up

This story is great. I hope you update soon. I can't wait.

well that was unexpected

Well I hope this is 'To Be Continued' not 'The End' as it just seems to be getting going. Please ignore the jerks who flame, your story is well written and entertaining so far. I loved Harry's march to doom and his rant on politicians as well as everyone's fear of there being two Jacks! Your original aliens and the veil being and old-style gate is fairly new in the fanfiction world and at this stage in both these 'worlds' that saying something. Hope to see more soon.

Good so far...how often do you update?

Thanks,

Johnny Bravo

lol... interesting chapter, like how you are bringing in different cultures.

Thanks!

Great chapter, enjoyed the Doc jokes at the end.

Thanks!

Interesting view on how to bring Harry to this verse :)

Thanks!

i have read these three chapters and i can honestly say that you have here is among one of the best SG/HP crosses on here. while the flashback threw me for a loop im glad your actually going back and explaining how harry got to where he is now, with that said i cant wait for the next chapter

Hey nice little flashback history lesson, and great 2nd chapter that part with janet frasier was hilarious...great story definitely going to keep my eye on this one...

Good Story

can't wait for the next

btw, the weapon on Harry's ship... Any inspiration gathered from the movie GI-Joe? No critic, I think it's an awesome weapon and hope you have more plans for it, though it is VERY hard to believe that the Endeluvians(?) didn't have more safeties to prevent it from destroying their own planet. Surely they knew the dangers of the weapon.

And didn't they colonize more planets? They obviously have/had decent spaceships and another planet colonized (from what I can gather from the dream and the rest of the flashback), so why did they become so easily extinct? At least, that's the impression I'm having right now. Where they being hunted and driven to their homeworld by Goa'uld? Hoping for more info. Also I hope you have bigger plans for Harry and his powerful(?) vessel than just joining SG1 through the gate with the usual mission as seen in the series.

Grtz (again, cuz I send the previous review too soon)

S.

I LIKE IT!

So far it's different from the 'usual' hpsg xovers. I do hope you're not planning on having Harry joining SG1 and going through the list of episodes and seasons, like many other stories do.

Grtz

S.

Great chapter mate I enjoyed it. I'm sorry that you had such a crude reviewer unfortunately there many people like that in the world please don't let it put you off writing this or any other story you have. I also think its disgusting to bring anyone else into it.