This was awesome xD

Wow! That was so good! You clearly put a lot of work and thought in to writing this, I love it!

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lol...very cute! i absolutely loved it! i am a huge doctor who fan... i was very sad to see david tennant go but i absolutely adore matt smith. he brings something new and all together wonderful in his portrayal as the doctor.

Fantastic read. Utterly fantastic!

Humorous, clever story-the last line (WW2 starting in 10 minutes) especially!

In the lodger when Matt Smith is on screen wearing only a towel and his hair is absolutely everywhere. You were spot on with the singing by the way.

Hehehe... Temperamental shower. *giggles*

For a first doctor who fanfic, you totally hit the mark and I love the story :D

And 'would you like a cup of tea' was pretty classic, I have to agree :P

:D i liked that line too :) brill x

I loved the part with the jammie dodger! I knew it was a biscuit/cookie from the moment that he held it up!

Love it, write more!

would you care for some tea?

HAHAHA FUNNIEST THING EVER...except for your story. More plz!

Adorable.

Aw, how sweet! I really can't wait for you to write more! 3

My favourite moment yet is when the Doctor is looking for the "escaped fish" in episode two. xD

I love this! :) great, great work! sorry if i dont give too much detail, but some annoying boy is next to me and it serious-leh annoys me! :D I'll give you a better review l8er!