yay for jedeite and raye! there are so few fics with them and this was very good.

great work! :D

Write more!

This is good. Keep up the work!

Good story and i got to thank you for reviwing my story and i know i put in stuff i shouldn't have but i'm new. but i got a question for this story will he marry her?

You have to continue this. PLEASE.

Please write more! I love Rei/Jadeite fics! They are sooo cute together!

sky_princess

aw this is cute...any story begins in a bar has potential *winks* seriously, keep this up! your dialogue is tight, and the whole thing is generally solid.