umm. . .ok. i have a few questions about this story

1. why would harry use sirius' name in a letter instead of using snuffles

2. sirius is a little out of character, he's supposed to be intelligent. why would he respond to a letter that clearly wasn't from ron AND why would he confirm in that letter that he is indeed sirius?

3. as you said in your story, he was an auror, don't you think he'd be a little hsrder to capture than that? this is the only man who successfully broke out of azkban, give him some credit.

Nice story! It's very good, I LOVE this last chapter, with the ministry falling and everything. The writing's great. Are you going to continue it? I really hope you do, I want to read more!

I don't like it when fic's end like that - what dream?

Hope to get an update...

SWait, first there are no first years, and know there are? Or is it just 2 dif. writers?

Annoying idiot. I hate Fudge. Athough the part with the food was funny.Did someone else start this?

""The other day, he had the unfortunate experience of having to sit perfectly still for a near hour as Snape went through book after book, a dark scowl on his face. Just as Harry was sure he couldn't hold back his sneeze any longer, the potions teacher slammed his last book down and stalked off in a rage at his inability to find whatever he was looking for. "" You just said snape is no longer teaching, and now he is back? I really have to belive that the dragon didn't do anything, and they used her form ,but how? Polyjucie potion doesn't work on animals. REALLY GOOD.

Head boy? 5th years? they are heads? And why are there 4? and none from Ravenclaw?

o... Percy saw the word Sirius. o. This is good. :)

this is so good =] i really hope you can try and update soon, i love how you got everyone of the characters (basically) in on the story somehow or another its juts really great :):):)

PLease keep writing this is a very good fic. I am hooked!

I LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S AMAZING!

but why haven't you update for the past 5 year?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! come on u can't leave us like this! the story is amazing! i swear to GOD!

please if you can update...i know it's been 5 year! but please! please!

LilyXJames

hey, are you going to finish this story? if not could you send me an outline of what you were planning on how to end it? I would love to know. Its a great fic.

I really like this fic so far and can't wait to read more!

couldnt even get past the first few sentences of this chapter, wtf ron a fifth year is head boy i thought this couldnt get any worse. well before you manage to ** this up any more i going to stop reading, thought i would drop a note to tell you how dissapointed i was. while spell check does some grammer check as well it helps to read over your work to avoid all the missing words you seem to have. if you are going to use other peoples ideas in your story at least have the decency of getting them correct, unspeakables man, not underwear and such, it is these types of errors that show you have no respect for others work and should not be allowed to post here.

unmentionables are another term for undergarments such as underwear and bra, unspeakables are people working for the dept of mysteries you ** idiot