Loved this chapter. cant wait to read more.

Oh, nice ending, but it screams for a sequel (hint-hint).

Good resolution for Talbot, and it would be helpful to have someone at the DA's office.

I loved your Twilight references, LOL. Keep writing, we love the Moonlight stories!

Phew. I wonder if Ben will ever realize how close he came to being killed. Sinead seems to be a piece of work, she certainly has the self-esteem to stand up to the male vampires. Rowan is great. Loved this!

Josef has his woman for eternity and Talbot is a lucky man. I would like an epilogue when we can see how Talbot deal with the vampire community.

Ohh poor Josef he's going to feel guilty and poor Rowan she didn't want to be turned, I hope the turn is OK and she doesn't hate Josef for this.

The only monster is this Michael, he's a dangerous lunatic.

Very interesting story! I'm enjoying a lot reading it.

Sinead sure seems interesting. And Im so glad Josef is gettin' some lovin' there isnt much for him out there. I absolutely adore the way you phrased your twilight reference. Cant wait to read more :)

Since this is fanFICTION . . . . can you make

Cole Joseph's biological son?

Story is great. Mick & Beth my fav couple,

but always enjoy seeing Joseph in love.

this is probably one of the best Josef/OC stories I've read so far. I cant wait to read more :)

Wow, you've really got the tension going with this chapter. I'm surprised that Rowan can be around so many humans at once. She must have some fantastic self-control and concentration.

I must say I agree with Lance (for once) and think Ben's gotta go. It's doubtful they can trust him to keep the vampire secret. I vote for a messy accident on the 15 to Vegas...

Love the story, and I suggest your next story continues where this one left off, then do a backstory with Rowan and Jjsef. Good writing!

I really hope they can get Ben to back off, he's really in danger of being sent to the tar pits and that would put Josef and Mick in even more danger, not to talk of Rowan and Cole.

So glad to hear that there will be more. We just aren't at the end yet.

Oh Benny, Benny, Benny, you really din't want to open up the can of worms that you just did.

Glad to see a new chapter, but OMG, can't they please KILL TALBOT? Or maybe turn him so he has to cooperate. Hmmm?

So glad Rowan is moving on and accepting herself. I know she will be good for him. Hope you can write more soon.