Very sweet, and hurrah for Fabrizioh stories.

As for the people who *informed* you of how Fabrizioh died - Well, no duh! That's why it's an alternate, you blind... *sigh*

Anyway, sweetness, and I liked the portrayal of the characters, even though you could benefit from a betatester.

A little historical note - in the time period in which this was set, it would be a huge scandal for her to share a flat with Fabri. I loved your angle on the feminists, I thought it was convincing and realistic.

Keep writing, and cheers to Danny Nucci,

Peace in Christ,

-Jess

I love it when Fabrizio survives, and I love your story. You may want to read my stories, Fabrizio's Story and Fabrizio's Visit.

..the story's okay, not excellent..and...um..Fabrizio died when the big funnel thing fell on him..

Its a very nice story, and please excuse my being pedantic, but didn't Fabrizio die when the funnel-thing fell off the ship and on top of him?