I really love the dynamic between Radames and Mereb. It makes the whole story seem natural. Also the interaction between Zoser and Radames seems to be in character. Great job!

Im not good at reviewing but i eantd you to know I really like this story.

Lovely. I enjoyed your story, but it would have been more engaging if you had included some of Radames' and Mereb's exploits. Perhapse you would continue with a sequel.

Au revoir,

Kaye

I just watched a summer production of Aida, and this is the first fanfiction of it that I've read. Good job, very I'm character.

I loved this story! The description was fantastic, as was the initial plot. Well done.

I loved it! Do you think you could write an more Aida fics? There really isnt enough out there.

Nice. I like how you've portrayed the characters, your's is almost the only realistic Zoser I've ever seen! Well done!

I'm sorry you've not been getting any reviews so here's one to send your way!

It's a very cute story and I like the plot and everything, but if I could make on suggestion, it would be that you have a bit of word repetition. Other than that I didn't see many things wrong with it. I enjoyed reading what you have posted!