Forgive me for this. I know you have recieved nothing but praise for this and no doubt some people will be mad at me, but it has to be said. Its become a drawl.

By drawl I mean you seem to keep dragging us on and on and on without end. Like how Harry Potter was getting before book seven. I hate to say it, but it might be time to start wrapping this up before you start losing readers. I know that I am starting to become tired of the drawl.

If you don't believe me about the dragging, take time to read your story before adding a new chapter.

Oh my God! The last sentence killed me! NO this can't be happening! I've cried a lot while reading this story and I thought I was safe but No! And I didn't realize it was the last chapter until I was finished. How long do I have to wait for an update? I hope not too long...

I love this story really much. There is the right amount of horror, angst, drama and romance (with a swig of humor and cuteness) to create a formula of a story that keeps the reader stuck until the end, even longer. I cried and laughed and even shouted out in frustration and anger in some chapters and can't wait for more chapters to cry over.
Well done!

I am so loving this story and the side stories for it. It is so wonderfully written.

Thank you so much for a new chapter. Still the best SebXCiel fanfic I've ever read. It doesn't even really feel like a fanfic, but an actual continuation of their story. Thank you! You've done such a great job!

Sebastian should shove a broom on that bitches vagina..

Thanks for the update!

The plot thickens!

I really enjoyed this chapter although I admit to being a little lost on which reaper is which but that is more due to my poor memory than your story. The re-write is going much better than the original and I am greatly looking forward to what happenes next.

I really hope that Cossette doesn't become pregnant by Doriaen/Sebby as that would be a minor distaster! I'm not sure if Sebby would kill Cossette if she carried his child due to his natural protective feelings towards his daughter. I can't remember but, isn't the product of two demons a harpy? Or am I getting confused? I really should go back and re-read a few chapters but I'm too lazy.

Thank you for the update and a very Merry Christmas to you as well! Lets hope the New Year is a good one.

I apologize for having not reviewed in a long while I am currently without a computer which sucks. But I still enjoyed the story. All of it. Well, except one detial that irritates me to no end. Ophelia. Really, you picked that as the baby's name. Not at all fitting the name plate for Kuro. Irony is the name plate and yet that name does not fit that kid.

Sigh. I enjoyed it but I forever have to block the kid out. Sorry. I just don't like that name and think you could have done better. Plus the kid irritates me to. I don't like her personality. I might end up liking one of their other kids but not her. Sorry if that offends but I can't help my feelings on that.

I do look forward to a sequal though. I am hoping for a boy still.

OoOoOooOo Undertaker enters the picture! So at least we know what that bird thing is now...D

It was so not boring! :)

This...was...AWESOMEEEEE. :) It's so dark! And at the same time it's enthralling. Great job

I absolutely love this story! It's one of my favorite Kuroshitsuji fanfics. I can't wait to see how it will progress.

I totally LOVED all the chapters. I can honestly say that this story is amazing and extraordinary. And for the first time in my life I've found a really good, realistic (as realistic as it can be anyway) mpreg Kuroshitsuji story! All the descriptions were lovely, this goes for the characters as well. It was a very interesting read, filled with fresh ideas.

I will definitely keep reading.
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This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read in the Kuroshituji CielxSebastian category. There is real character development, and an interesting plot. You really stuck to the characters roots, not making them seem too outlandish or foreign. The whole baby thing isn't over done at all, and makes the whole genre of mpreg completely likeable. In fact, I'm not sure most people wouldn't agree, but personally I would love if you just did a short snippet while Ciel was pregnant, if only to see how he managed, and what Sebastian was like during that time. Either way, a lovely story, and I can not wait till the rest of this one, or Cheshire City's companion piece, is updated.

Best wishes, AngryRedOctopus

I have enjoyed reading so far! This is my first Black Butler fiction and I am glad that this was my introduction to the fandom! Keep up the good work!