 Saalvatore 10/10/10 . chapter 50Love this! |
 OmniSayian 10/9/10 . chapter 50You have to write another story with these guys. That was just... amazing. |
 Celestial Pendent 10/4/10 . chapter 48What disease? Smallpox, Syphilis, TB? Now I'm curious. And does Jacob have to do the same to Richard in the future? |
 OmniSayian 10/2/10 . chapter 48Good chapter. Can't wait for the last two. |
 Jimelda 9/19/10 . chapter 1Oooh, very interesting first chapter. I love drabbles like this and am very interested to read some from the Man in Black's point of view. |
 Arlena4815162342 9/19/10 . chapter 47:O interesting how she cant heal them...
poor Esau, being sick sucks DX |
 Tweede-Kans 9/19/10 . chapter 47Oofa, poor Jacob and Esau. I didn't even think why Mother would scold Jacob from touching his brother and then it's like, DUH, germs... anyways.
I'm really intrigued to see where this goes-and it makes me sad that you're only a few prompts away from being done! :( I've really enjoyed these! |
 OmniSayian 9/12/10 . chapter 46Interesting. Not sure where you're going with this, but we'll see soon. |
 OmniSayian 8/28/10 . chapter 45Hey, you took my idea! Thanks, always nice when people listen. Good chapter, update soon. |
 Tweede-Kans 8/28/10 . chapter 45I really enjoyed this. I think Claire's descent into craziness would be a very interesting subject to explore, and you captured her slow unraveling quite well-the rationalization and emotion. I liked especially the touch of Charlie being in front of her, no matter which way she turned. It added just enough eeriness, even though we already know who it is anyways-because Claire doesn't know.
Anyway. I'm babbling. Keep it up! :) (Only 5 more to go-that must be an interesting thought.) |
 Tweede-Kans 8/18/10 . chapter 44Hmmmm-wow. Really well done, as usual. I really enjoy your take on them as brothers, those in-between years, and how implicitly you're shaping Jacob's psychology.
(I gotta say, I was expecting another chapter with Illana post-the-last-one, but-all the same, this was wonderfully written. And very sad. Poor Jacob, always under his brother's shadow...) |
 OmniSayian 8/18/10 . chapter 44Poor Jacob. I found this a while back, and it's quite interesting.
Something that would be a good chapter would be another MIB/Claire interaction. I do ship that, which is kinda creepy (I have him turn into Charlie, and 'comfort' Claire), but it doesn't have to ship them, could just be them talking. Just an idea.
Fifty chapters, right? You're almost done, congrats! |
 Tweede-Kans 8/12/10 . chapter 43Ooo-suspense. I hadn't thought of what Brother-Esau-would think of Illana, or how they'd get along... not really, anyways. Oofa. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
(And this has 50 prompts, yeah? So you're in the homestretch-congrats! well-done! :)) |
 ninaxwings 8/11/10 . chapter 43I'm still loving this. I love reading about Jacob as a father. The interactions between him and Ilana are sweet. I hate Esau for doing whatever he did. |
 Arlena4815162342 8/4/10 . chapter 34aww this chapter was sweet :) poor mib though :( |