I love this passage! I will definately read the full story!

Intriguing! Waiting to read the rest of the story. Pls post soon :D

Definitely interesting. I like the passage and it does work out of context. I hope to see your fanfic when it is completed as there aren't enough Professional fictions. I would have liked a longer chapter, but as you mentioned, it is just a teaser of a moment in your larger story. Well done!

Cheers!