Hey! I just found this! Woo Hoo! Wish you'd add another chapter! Hint! Hint! Loved it.

Okay ... would SERIOUSLY like a sequel to this one. Like ... a lot. I can't explain why I'm such a sucker for Michael whumps or whumps in general for that matter, but this piece already has a special place in my heart. Nice!

*HelluoLibrorum

i loved it as i LOVE all BN Fic's

A couple typos ("loosing" should be "losing" and there is also a sentence that doesn't quite make sense to me) but overall it's a good story.

I like the voice in your sweet, mothering Maddie. I noticed one typo, do you want to know about it?

I wasn't planning on reviewing, but I couldn't help but click the Review button when I had finished reading. The evil green button-it Made me click it. Devious little Review button...

I like how Strickler managed to shoot Michael, causing Michael to stay there bleeding and wondering what was happening with Fiona. It's brilliant as an AU, and I found that you did a great job writing it in a very Michael-POV fashion. You had him characterized very well, along with Sam and Maddie.

Basically, great job on this one-shot, I enjoyed it-and rarely do I enjoy Burn Notice AUs, so that's saying something. As always, keep writing.

-Vendetta

Great story I loved it.

Cool. Would like to see it continued.