This is really awesome! You wrote it in such a similar style to the narration in the movie I can almost hear Christian Bale saying the words as I read! Lovely :)

This was honestly amazing, and it floored me. Are you sure you're not Pat Bateman? (;

Good. Much more in character than some stories I've read but it would be better with more description or Bateman going off on a random tangent about the restaurant with the soup.