I love this story. It's very good. I hope you update soon.

why does it end here?! we need to get on to alice and jasper!

Hi are you going to finish this story? i hope so as it is fantastic you make them all have little quwirks to their personalities and that make them stand out and makes it a very belivable story.

This story is amazing. I love it.. please keep writing!

you wrote this? this is amizing! i love it plez keep going! oh and congrats on your baby (it was on your profile)lol

UPDATE3this!

you should do more Edward and Esme!

Please, please update this story! It has been great to explore those early Cullen family days. Now we get to meet Alice and Jasper. Please?

Hi, first of all, I must say that I'm from Brazil, and my writing english it's a little poor, so I'm sorry about it.

I must say that I loved, I fall in love with this fanfic, really, it's amazing, and the history, it's perfect. Congrats.

Omg i was hooked reading this cant wait for more your a great writer

Great story :) Enjoy you writing style and really love hearing a bit more about esme she is fantastic!

eeeeeee i love this story so much _ please, PLEASE update soon, I'm begging you! Please? With Carlisle on top? Or Emmett? Or Jasper? Or... well.. anyone ?(but mostly Carlisle? XD)

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So I just read five chapters straight of this story...

I LOVE IT!

Really. This story, so far from what I've read, is most definitely one of the BEST Carlisle and Esme stories I've ever read. Ever.

And I just wanted to throw out there that the kiss was amazingly written. So adorable! 3

keep writing, please! :D

excellent choice of topic for this chapter !

shows how long rosalie's need for a baby has been present and the depth of love and maturity emmett has !

brilliant

continuing to love your work :D

I LoVE it Its awesum!

KKCopper

I always wondered how the "immortal child" discussion would go between Carlisle and Esme. I think you handled it brilliantly. Esme so sweet, Carlisle so doting.