i like it. it was well done!

I absolutely loved this story! Yoh was so sweet. I loved how you made it clear how much he cared about Anna - how he immediately felt when she needed him, how he stood up for her in front of his grandmother, how he convinced her to come back with him, the word he used... It all made me smile. I also loved the relationship between them, the tender moment that Amidamaru witnessed; how Anna felt guilty that she hadn't trusted him and how he seemed to understand her better than she herself did.

Again, loved it! :)

Woowww! XD Ah, I really wish it could be more longer. But, this is the best. Hahaha D. Love it! Please write another story! XD

Oh my God! The ending is very love-strucking! This is great! You take my breath away just imagining their lovely gazing! Please write more XD

I want a sequel. But I suppose there wouldn't be the one, so... Just want to say, it was really great. How you described their feelings... Amazing.

I've suddenly realized that I should have read the manga before reading this..

Ah well! What you gonna do?

Update soon please! :)

heheh.. i like it!

wow, loved this chapter..

love your fic, please, post soon!

yoh's so sweet in this chapter! (_) wonder what happened to anna?

hope you update soon!

I LOVE this hapter! The atmosphere is just so intense. Kino is so cruel but I love how Yoh showed how much he cares for Anna! Cheers to YOH! But I kind of think that Kino's doing this for certain reason! I'll eagerly await the next chapter!

ooohhh... Matamune's back yay! I actually read this on my phone so i couldn't write a review right away but hey! here it is. I like how your story makes me want for more but like what the others said maube next time a longer chapter PLEASE?

why do you always write short ones? huhu you are so mean!

curious... gotta read the rest...

Very, very good. I must say I like such confident and slightly dominant Yoh...Im looking forward next chapter, so keep going!

Greetings from Czech Republic