dude the story is awsome i'v been to bussy to read on fanfiction haging out with courtney and all so you did a great job...im going to give you advice that manny people give me! make the story a bit longer per chapter especaly if you want me to stay intertaned (it'll give me a reason to tell courtney no ;)to coming over )

Nice Story

Needs better grammar and has some minor spelling and sentence structure mistakes.