|Reviews for Last Tango in Forks|
| jt1972 5/25/10 . chapter 7
WELL! HOT HOT HOT! Damn it... my hubby doesn't get home for another couple of hours... geeeeeezzzz... cold shower or do I fidget for a few hours... I'm leaning towards the fidgeting side!
So... since this "oh so fake - fictional world" if Bella ever is too busy... I'd be happy to help Edward "sleep"!
So, in answer to your question or concerns... YOU did a fantastic job with the lust filled, definitely filled with hotness!
Well done! Looking forward to next chapter!
| TMBen 5/25/10 . chapter 7
I like they are getting more personal :)
| savanablue 5/25/10 . chapter 7
Unnnnffffff...that is all. Sooo effin good! I'd really like to borrow that spare key you have *bats eyelashes*. Great chapter!
| zkcej 5/25/10 . chapter 7
OMG this chapter reminds me of KOL sex on fire its so freekin hooooot!
i love it!
| Cullenfest 5/25/10 . chapter 7
One word: exquisite!
| snickerdoodle6949 5/25/10 . chapter 7
OMG, that was some f*ckhawt sexin going on. They are definately falling for one another. Loved it!
| AngelaSampedro99 5/25/10 . chapter 5
WOW I can't wait for you unvail the mystery behind Tanya and Edwards relationship... the lemon was fantastic... and I forgot to mention it in the previous review... please pretty please get bed Edward an actual bed with sheets and a boxspring... it skived me out a bit that they were fucking on a mattress with no sheets LOL! Loved the chapter
| AngelaSampedro99 5/25/10 . chapter 4
Reading this chapter was definitely WORTH IT! First of all that was a fuckhot lemon... sweet baby jesus I need to smoke a cigarette after that.
This line had me cracking up...LOL!:
"made her either want to dance or fuck... and this guy didn't look like he was in the mood to dance."
| AngelaSampedro99 5/25/10 . chapter 3
This chapter was really deep we got a lot of insight into Edward and it was written in a really natural way... the story has deepth and character and not just a bunch of lusious lemons... even if those lusious lemons are my favorite. LOL!
| AngelaSampedro99 5/25/10 . chapter 2
I totally thought Bella was single till this point and then at the end you hit us with that... LOVE IT, I hardly get surprised anymore. Don't like that she cheated but fuck that... this is fiction LOL! and I am enjoying every minute of it.
| AngelaSampedro99 5/25/10 . chapter 1
I can't stand 16 and pregnant either LOL! I loved this first chapter... really got me hooked in reading the rest... now I am rereading it and reviewing because it is that GOOD!
| AngelaSampedro99 5/25/10 . chapter 7
I swear anytime Edward says MINE... makes me go nuts. Loved the chapter. Feel bad for Jacob though, but only a little bit ;)
| bjelaja 5/25/10 . chapter 7
Oh yes very delicious steamy. Loved it.
| baynewen 5/25/10 . chapter 7
It is 32 degrees Celsius and humid here right now and you ask me if this was steamy enough, hell yeah! 32 is a walk in the park compared to that scene.
Damn my husband is sitting next to me reading a book and I have a Victim Services Broad meeting I have to attend in 15 minutes. I'm going to rubbing my thighs together all the way there and probably throughout the meeting, he'll never know what hit him when I get home!
Edward and Bella are so free spirited and compelling, yet damaged and desperate at the same time. I could hear their defensive walls cracking as I read the chapter!
Bella has it right though Edward is a god and I thought I would choke on my ice tea when he started to stroke himself. Sorry but when I was reading that I got this vivid visual of Robert Pattinson doing just that and I about lost it, my husband gave me the eye over his book and smiled, and said "I guess I'm going to be a very happy man later"!LOL man is he right.
| Nevaeh09 5/25/10 . chapter 7