I cannot read this you're formatting is terrible. every time a new character speaks you should begin a new paragraph.

mean person. how could you stop here? please PLEASE continue

Loved it. Please continue

This story is soooooo good! Please update soon! :) :)

Fantastic chapter!

Love it. Add more soon.

You're welcome! And I am SO glad that you updated this!

As for the chapter... Wow! Intense! Red John with a different tactic! I thought the beginning was good too. Jane and Lisbon in a domestic atmosphere, nice!

SERIOUSLY... Update SOON!

OMG you can be really evil I never thought you could write something like that

but great chapter anyway

btw I am still waiting for the update of Red Alert

Wow intense chapter! Very well written as usual, poor Jane but still I love this story :) please update soon!

Oh my gosh! That was intense! Great job, and update soon! *hugs* -Jelly Bean :)

I must say, for someone who loves Jane as much as you do, you sure make him go through hell. lol

But I get it, is to build the drama. Good story.

Anyways, I loved it. Poor Jane. I hope he doesn't die. till next time. (Hugs you back)

Very well written you did a good job, please update soon :)

Woah, most intense 3 minutes of my life! Okay, maybe not, but defs of my day :) I really like this story, please update soon :D

Such and amazing story! Awesome! Great job! I absolutely loved every chapter of it ! Its very sweet, touching ! I love how their relationship developed trough the chapters! you described their emotions so great! please write more chapters for this story! i cant get enough of it !

Did you tell me something bad was gonna happen? Oh no! I don't like bad stuff. But then again, no one does. Anyway, I like this. ; )