 Midnight Dove 8/2/03 . chapter 1 i expect you know this already, but:
THIS FIC KICKS ARSE! I LOVE IT! |
 ThyBloodthirstyCameo 7/29/03 . chapter 1 ::big teary eyes:: That touched my heart! ::breaks down sobbing:: That was a very good fic. Keep up da good work. |
 Harmonic Friction 7/1/03 . chapter 1Very sad. I love Neville, though, so this was enjoyable. |
 The Smiley Bandit 8/29/01 . chapter 1OOOOOOOOOO great story! _ |
 Jade59 7/7/01 . chapter 1so sad! |
 Anguis 3/15/01 . chapter 1Great story! (I love the details about Trevor the toad.) I've been a bit disappointed at the dirth of Neville stories. Thanks for writing this one. The few that I've found tend to explain his parents' situation in a sentence or two, have him be sad a minute, and then move on. Your description captures more of the emotion and isn't too Harry-centric (a major gripe I have with some of the others...oh, poor Neville, but Harry-the-hero has suffered sooo much more...you get the idea).
There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but they're mostly minor annoyances. Also, some parts are a little stilted.
Anyway, thanks again for the fic. |
 curlyqueen4 12/10/00 . chapter 1That is sad *sob* i feel like crying
*sob* *sob* |
 sarah 11/10/00 . chapter 1 Well done. I enjoyed this story. |
 Meghan 9/4/00 . chapter 1 Oh my god, that was absolutly beautiful. I loved it. You had me crying! Great story. |
 waternymph 8/29/00 . chapter 1 Oh my god! I'm bawling my eyes out! That was sooooo sad! but soooo good! Iloved it! ::Danielle wipes tears from her face::
This story was extremely touching |
 Emerald 8/28/00 . chapter 1 It was very good. You have lovely style. The only thing is that I don't see Neville talking like that, all flowery and stuff. He seemed a bit OOC. It was a good story though. |
 Jenn 8/16/00 . chapter 1 That was so sweet. I wanted to cry. This was totally different from you since the stories that I have read that you have written are normal or incredibly funny(The frequently Vanisihing Files) so this was a big change. Great job. |
 MaryR 8/16/00 . chapter 1 I like Remus fics. Cool one. :) *snif* |
 Katie 8/16/00 . chapter 1 Awww im like crying! That was really good! |
 Princess Kate 8/16/00 . chapter 1 Did I review this twice? Sorry, if I did, my computer is acting wierd. Very well written, and the Lupin/ Naville connection was quite interesting. I have a soft spot for Neville, and you've written him very convincingly. At times in the story, though, Neville seemed a bit too verbose for what we've yet seen of him, but I guess. Didn't know ol' Neville had it in him to be such a good story teller. ;) But on the whole, I really did like this alot. |