I rally like this one, I hope you post an update!

Great job! Not many grammar mistakes, and the characters were pretty close to the real ones. I was in a performance (i was Amaryllis) of the Music Man, so it's cool to read about what it was like after Harold was released. Awesome!

It was...okay, but I wasn't too smiley about the very negative portrayal of Charlie.

Please please please please update soon!

Good chapter, you're doing an excellent job in writing so far. By the way, just curious but how many chapters are your stories going to be? I ask because it helps me in my writing by getting a sense of how many chapters people usuaully write.

Good chapter, good story so far; keep up the good writing; and thank you for the advice on my Scooby Doo story ideas.