|Reviews for Trouble In River City: Old Version|
| Jael73 11/30/11 . chapter 6
I rally like this one, I hope you post an update!
| Poetlaureate498 6/14/10 . chapter 1
Great job! Not many grammar mistakes, and the characters were pretty close to the real ones. I was in a performance (i was Amaryllis) of the Music Man, so it's cool to read about what it was like after Harold was released. Awesome!
| The Music Woman 5/13/10 . chapter 4
It was...okay, but I wasn't too smiley about the very negative portrayal of Charlie.
| Mormeril 5/2/10 . chapter 4
Please please please please update soon!
| Scoobyfan1 4/27/10 . chapter 2
Good chapter, you're doing an excellent job in writing so far. By the way, just curious but how many chapters are your stories going to be? I ask because it helps me in my writing by getting a sense of how many chapters people usuaully write.
| Scoobyfan1 4/25/10 . chapter 1
Good chapter, good story so far; keep up the good writing; and thank you for the advice on my Scooby Doo story ideas.