I like most of this story, but I don't really like how it ends. The last two lines don't really feel integrated to me. I love how you describe his loss of memory concerning Xion though.

Auuuugh. The ending lines... I was doing okay, and then you had to go and punch me in the gut. Gah. That was really well done.

*eyes hindbrain* I think you woke back up the save-Axel plotbunnies again. Eeeeevil woman...

Kudos!

I bet the Organization DOES have a next life. It has to! I like the Organization too much for it to just disappear!

Wow, this is amazing. Really well written! I honestly don't know what to say to it.

AWW!