so i was overemotional before I started reading this final chapter (being a woman and all) but by the end of this i was crying. totally beautiful!

oh this is wonderful!

I love this story! I especilly love the ending of this chapter, i find it adorable!

This is great, vorking on this story from Disney Studio, on film or tv series!

nice story, you're a very talented writer if this is a normal sample of your work.

I really like the way you write in first person as helga. It really gives deep insight into her character, and i think you have captured her attitude very well. You're a brilliant writer, and i enjoy reading your work very much, and even though it's very long stuff, it's worth it in the end. Very rewarding.

Not bad, not bad at all. Me likey.

I Realy like how this sotry ended. I love Atlantis

THANK YOU!I have been an Atlantis fan since it first came out and have always wondered what had happened to Helga(my fave character).I loved tha story.

Excellent, well written story...i have often been to your site...i think it's amazing you've met Claudia Christian...you are an excellent writer

10/10

This was wonderful! I'm so glad someone else realized Helga was really a good person, just... misguided. When I professed my admiration of the character, my friends told me I was nuts and called her evil, but I knew they were wrong! This was a great story, and the characterization was fabulous!

I prob'ly should have done this a while ago, but you know how it is :) I really enjoyed this, course, I'm a sucker for a good Helga fic ;) The characterizations were good and it had a nice flow.

I absolutely loved your Atlantis story! It seems like that story could have actually happened. You did a really good job of keeping the characters' statements and feelings true to their roles in the movie. Keep writing these stories! By the way, I like Sarah Brightman too!

VERY WELL DONE! Karen was able to keep the characters original personalities and attitudes the same. I liked the techniques you used!

Oooooh! Liked very much! My first review was for German Lullaby,but I guess in all my stupid brainlessness I looked this over! I didn't think Helga should've died in that fall. Sure it was a long ways down,but Helga's one tough chickie! I give five stars! Yay!

Ya know, I really didn't believe that Helga just died there either. Not abad stroy. I'm glad someone else likes Helga. Strong females rock!