Whew, finally made it to the latest chapter. As I said in my last review, I really like what you two have done with this story. Normally I don't like to read docs with oc's in them, but I find that I actually like the characters that you've created (when Caleb isn't being a complete asshat, that is).

The inner fangirl in me squealed with guilty joy when Knox and Grell got it on, not gonna lie. I love how open Grell is accepting all the attention she/he is getting, it's so like her/him.

I do hope that you intend to continue with this lovely story. It's my policy to never read a story until it's been completed so I won't be disappointed if it never is, but I couldn't resist reading this one. So please, please don't give up on it!

-Necury

I've really liked what you two have given us so far, though I'm not usually terribly fond if rp stories. But you've managed to pull it off.

I was going to wait until I'd reached the end to review, but I just have two little knitpicks that were abundant in this particular chapter.

1. You tend to put a comma where a period should go, thus creating run on sentences. That can make reading a little difficult sometimes.

2. According to Yana Tosobo, Grell is left handed so s/he wouldn't be terribly inconvenienced by the loss of her/his right hand. So s/he wouldn't really need Sebastian to feed her/him. (Though I do love the image, ohohoho)

Again, these are just two minor knitpicks. As I said, I've really enjoyed reading this over all. Now on to the next chapter!

-Necury

Oh please tell me you didnt give up on this story!

Its been ever so long since you updated!

I just started reading your story, i couldnt put it down for a second please do update soon

Oh god, you have to finish this!

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH and I can't wait for an update! I love your characterizations so much, an your OC's are awesome, and I just LOVE THIS 3

D:...I AM STUNNED

FINALLLY! :D I love u! Update soon! :)

Omg you updated it yay I'm so glad! I love your writing it's so great! I can't wait for the next chapter make it a good one!

everyone/grell is so hot, I cant belived you finally update! You definely made my day! Cant wait for the next one :)

amazing story, cant wait for more to come!

everyone loves grell but I got feeling somethingbig will happen enjoy reading this make more please :)

Just found out about this story, hopefully you and your sister will continue updating! Dont leave us hanging!

Uh, such a wonderful story. I wish you update this... But it looks likes its been months since this last chapter was published... UPDATE PLEASE we need to know how it ends!

OMG I JUST FINISHED READING THE LAST CHAPTER AFTER A WHOLE WEEK OF READING THIS! This is the best Kuro Fanfic I have ever read and it saddens me to see that it hasn't been updated in so long just when it started getting good! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL SHINIGAMI UPDATE THIS FIC I AM BEGGING YOU! TT I want MORE! It's so amazing please write more please please please!

Wow. I mean... Wow. I absolutely love you writing, but I'm definitely disappointed to see this story end! I have to say my favourite part was either the 'I want your heart' thing, (beautiful by the way, and soooo romantic!) or when the focus was on Sebastian and you wrote: 'Sebastian didn't want to love Grell. Sebastian didn't want to love anyone.' That was the most beautiful wording. I know it might not seem like much, but it was so meaningful! (Seriously though I almost cried when Sebby almost cried! So sad for him!) Gosh, I sure hope you have considered a career in writing! If you do end up writing a book, I've edited books before and would definitely love to help you out (No offense but some of your grammar isn't the best... But that doesn't mean it can't be improved!) Anyway, if this isn't too forward, contact me at . I'd love to hear from you even if it just means having a conversation with such a gifted writer! Sorry, writerS! I can't immagine how close you two must be in order to write like this! Anyway, sorry for babbling on like this, but I can hardly find a dedicated writers that have such firm story lines *pun unintentional*! If you don't need an editor, It really doesn't matter to me. I would have PMed you, but I do not have an account for this website, which I would but I don't have the focus for such things as writing stories or novels. Either way, I do have an account on the official Black Butler forums, (HollyFrost17) So if you have an account I do wish you'd contact me there as well. (I'm undercover on this site as a newbie, so disregard that the account is a new one as well as what my profile states. Wow this must have been very boring to read though... Sorry about that. Anyway, love the story, and farewell for now.