This is good. I hated the part when Angel & Cordelia were about to get together, and then Groo walks in...damn! (but, C & A's love could never last)

I like it. I like it a lot. :) POVs are difficult, but you pulled it off.

oh, groo ruins everything. the title is very fitting, this is good!

Oh! That was sad! I wish that's what really happened at the end of WITW(and who knows.. maybe so!)... good job! :)

great job! I loved your story. It was very touching..Will you write more?

Wow. Nice piece! :)