Wow, great story! Surprised to see there are not many reviews for this. Please update soon! Can't wait to see how this will turn out!

I am surprised to see that this doesn't have very many reviews.

Argh. Normally I'm such a fic-flamer and I would chew you out for your couple of grammar mistakes. I go into reading a fic expecting it to be horrible-no fault of your own, but hey, I'm a pessimist.

And I was more than pleasantly surprised with this story. It had a wonderful, clear storytelling structure-very cinematical even when going through routine scenes.

And the characters were well-written as well. I've read...well a lot of fanfictions, and finding a fic where the characters are actually well-written, in character, and not trolloping about with a bunch of OCs, is truly a blessing.

The only thing I have to critique you on is the ending.

As in...more please?

haha. Seriously, though. Job well done. I tip my hat to you.

-Silent Shepherd

I don't know why there aren't any reviews on this! I really like it. Correct grammar and for the situation, I think you got their characters down pretty well. I really hope you continue! I want to see where this goes :)