   Taryn Streambattle 5/12/11 . chapter 1Wonderful job! I love the banter between Eowyn and Faramir, and the fact that there is someone who wants to follow in Eowyn's footsteps!
The conversation between Merry and Eowyn was another good part- It brought a smile to my face. Those two need more time. Your writing style is reminescient of Tolkien's, as are the speech patterns. I wonder what's next... |
| Taryn Streambattle 8/9/09 . chapter 2 MORE! |
| Mary Lillian Johnson 4/1/07 . chapter 2 it was good, couldn't find any mistakes this time. keep it up, keep writing, I want to know what is the next event. This is a thrilling tale.
MLJ |
| Mary Lillian Johnson 4/1/07 . chapter 1 it's good, good plot, good grammar and it's pretty good. It's just minor spelling, you have, maybe look over it again. It's just a couple of words. Nothing major, so if you don't want to bother it's really no problem, but it's best to mind if you really want to look impressive. Not that you don't already. Keep this up.
MLj |
| The Real Eowyn 1/4/07 . chapter 1 i loved your story! although, i think that eowyn should have some more character to her, although, do not read me wrongly, it may be only because i have only read the first chapter. :) anyway, you did a wonderful job.
-the real eowyn |
| Ireth 3/29/05 . chapter 2 This is such a great story! I hope u make the third chapter soon! |
| She Who Gives Migraines 7/12/02 . chapter 2 *ahem* Why you leave story hanging for so long? _ I'm really loking foreward (Grr...She hates that word, grrr...) to seeing more of this story done! Good so far, and a plausible bad guy. Very nice. *begs* More, more, more, more, more... |
| Jessica 5/5/02 . chapter 2 This is a wonderful story, please continue. |
| SyiveSe 3/21/02 . chapter 2 /huggles imouto/ GREAT FIC! Why do you leave me hanging in mid-air? Continue! Onegai! I'm on my knees. :) |
| anon 3/3/02 . chapter 1 Are you working on part 3? This story is so cool. |
| Hankai-Ayame 2/25/02 . chapter 2 ...u must continue,for i crave it...
YYYYAAAAAAYYYYYYY!
PLEAZZZZZZ CONTINUE! |
| qdpie 2/20/02 . chapter 2 Hey, Where's more of the story? Me wanna read it! |
| Isabelle Carter 2/11/02 . chapter 2 Yeah go Eowyn! Put that snobby king of Gondor in his place! |
| Hal 2/10/02 . chapter 2 A very interesting story! I particularly liked the opening scene of chapter 1 (in the stable), and Faramir and Eowyn's conversation in chapter 2 over whether she should stay to hear what Aragorn had to say. I look forward to reading more from you :). |
| Alon 2/10/02 . chapter 2 Interestinger and interestinger...this is really very well written. |
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