MORE!

it was good, couldn't find any mistakes this time. keep it up, keep writing, I want to know what is the next event. This is a thrilling tale.

MLJ

it's good, good plot, good grammar and it's pretty good. It's just minor spelling, you have, maybe look over it again. It's just a couple of words. Nothing major, so if you don't want to bother it's really no problem, but it's best to mind if you really want to look impressive. Not that you don't already. Keep this up.

MLj

i loved your story! although, i think that eowyn should have some more character to her, although, do not read me wrongly, it may be only because i have only read the first chapter. :) anyway, you did a wonderful job.

-the real eowyn

This is such a great story! I hope u make the third chapter soon!

*ahem* Why you leave story hanging for so long? ^_^ I'm really loking foreward (Grr...She hates that word, grrr...) to seeing more of this story done! Good so far, and a plausible bad guy. Very nice. *begs* More, more, more, more, more...

This is a wonderful story, please continue.

//huggles imouto// GREAT FIC! Why do you leave me hanging in mid-air? Continue! Onegai! I'm on my knees. :)

Are you working on part 3? This story is so cool.

...u must continue,for i crave it...

YYYYAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!
PLEAZZZZZZ CONTINUE!

Hey, Where's more of the story? Me wanna read it!

Yeah go Eowyn! Put that snobby king of Gondor in his place!

A very interesting story! I particularly liked the opening scene of chapter 1 (in the stable), and Faramir and Eowyn's conversation in chapter 2 over whether she should stay to hear what Aragorn had to say. I look forward to reading more from you :).

Interestinger and interestinger...this is really very well written.

Wow, you updated! And the story is getting better! I especially liked how Faramir stood up for his wife against Aragonr! Now *that* is a man who knows the value of his wife! I will need some time to forgive you for getting poor Beregond killed, but I think I'll manage it. Keep up the good work!