 mzhollywood100 3/25/12 . chapter 1Awww this was very sweet... I'm happy she found happiness...nice job! |
 Marie One 2/18/12 . chapter 1 I am hoping for a follow up and a baby too. |
 VampLuvah 7/29/11 . chapter 1I was reading a BxE fic yesterday and there was a scene between Edward and his adopted mom Esme that got me thinking maybe Esme and Edward may not be too bad. So I went fic diving and found this beauty.
I absolutely loved this. I laughed, cried, sighed, and smiled.
You did an awesome job describing her hurt and feelings. I can't love you enough for that. |
 letitbe54 7/23/11 . chapter 1Cute I like it good job! |
 jaclynheartz 6/7/11 . chapter 1really good! |
 mouthwatering 5/5/11 . chapter 1 Sweet, it would have been cool for her to get pregnant. |
 Mell C 5/2/11 . chapter 1great character depth and detail to the story- thank you. wonderful build up. i vote for a continuation- but i am greedy. |
 Kat-n-cupcakes 4/25/11 . chapter 1Wow! Loves this :D there was a link in twitter, and I am so, so glad that I clicked on it! This story is absolutely adorable, but also sad at the same time - that Esme's husband could be so mean to her :( I'm really glad Edward can see her properly as a beautiful person no matter whether she can have children or not...its so cute :) your writing is so good - is there a chance you might continue this? xxxxxx |
 Robs-Dirty-Girl-69 4/19/11 . chapter 1Loved loved loved this fic! Definitely left me wanting more, so gimmie gimmie gimme :p lol |
 ECullen50Shades 4/18/11 . chapter 1Saw this at PPSS.
The pairing had me hesitant to read BUT I am so glad I gave it a shot.
You told the tale beautifully and I really enjoyed it!
xoxo |
 Cullen Crazy01 4/18/11 . chapter 1Wish I had a "kid" neighbor like Edward!
Thanks for writing! |
 lisamichelle17 4/18/11 . chapter 1I really loved this one shot and you did a wonderful job in writing it. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us. Edward and Esme is not usually a pairing I read. Yes, I am one of those canon woman *winks* However, lately, I've been drawn to other pairings. The way you wrote Esme was beautifully. I loved the way you wrote her. The pain that she carried of not being able to carry Charles child was heart wrenching. The attraction that she felt for Edward was strong and I loved the built up to it. Edward definitely pursued her. I loved that. I loved the sexy times they shared. It was realistic. I like to think that they did get together for the long haul but my imagination does not think it was easy. However, it was worth it. Thank you, again. The PPSS rec'd you. |
 SubtlePen 4/17/11 . chapter 1WONDERFUL! |
 jjuliebee 1/15/11 . chapter 1My god. This was amazing. How you made me love this pairing is miraculous! |
 Capricorn75 9/6/10 . chapter 1Hopey, I suck, I'm just now reading this. But I really really loved it. This line hit me so hard- Esme was too old to be young and carefree like she longed for, and too young to feel as old as she did.
It's pretty damn sad how strongly I can relate to that. Thanks for writing this and sharing with us :-) |