Awww...how warm and fuzz-okay, not. I'm writing a review for the wrong story if I start that way. Um. Yes. I liked it, being the Squall/Zell fan I am, and also being a random fan of parentheses used to say the things that aren't said, or are ambivalent, or other such things. Also, excellent use of Shiva in a shortfic. .

even though i'm not a squall/zell fan, or a squall/seifer, this is a . piece of work!

Yeah yeah yeah!

::Does the "Yaioh fanfiction is cool" dance::

Thou art an excellent writer of angst! I'd read the X-men stuff, but I'd be lost coz I'm not famialar with it.

Keep it up! I was wondering, do you do requests?

That was just great! I luved this short story! Write more! _

Beautiful... With and without you... Love it.

Short but astoundingly moving. Bravo, can't wait for more.

Short and sweet! Well, like bitter-sweet... or somthing... me like! _

erm...good writing...i didn't know it was zell/squall hahaha