|Reviews for Broken Girl|
| XxDr.FangxX 11/4/10 . chapter 1
i loved the way you wrote this i cant believe it only has 4 reviews. great job ;)
| girl with fangs98 8/25/10 . chapter 1
Brilliant! You story is SO good!
I love you use of adjectives!
The lines like :
her voice laced with sadness
Angela saw the raging curiosity burning in my eyes
were really good!
There were a few little mistakes, like I think you could have used commas more often ( , ) and a few small spelling mistakes, but nothing really big.
It was a good idea to have Mr. Banner play the same movie as the one Bella and Edward watched together!
Very well written!
| Hidden Traces 5/9/10 . chapter 1
| livebyinsanity 4/25/10 . chapter 1
That was so sad! But good! You had me in tears as well! Great work!
| Tianaa 4/25/10 . chapter 1
WOW, this is soo good. i wanted to know what bella was like from a different POV and you did a great job. I wouldnt picture bella as running out of the room half way through the lesson but you wrote it, you can say what you like. Kudos 3