i loved the way you wrote this i cant believe it only has 4 reviews. great job ;)

Brilliant! You story is SO good!

I love you use of adjectives!

The lines like :

her voice laced with sadness

and

Angela saw the raging curiosity burning in my eyes

were really good!

There were a few little mistakes, like I think you could have used commas more often ( , ) and a few small spelling mistakes, but nothing really big.

It was a good idea to have Mr. Banner play the same movie as the one Bella and Edward watched together!

Very well written!

Well done!

Well done

That was so sad! But good! You had me in tears as well! Great work!

WOW, this is soo good. i wanted to know what bella was like from a different POV and you did a great job. I wouldnt picture bella as running out of the room half way through the lesson but you wrote it, you can say what you like. Kudos 3