I loved this chapter.

The flashback was amazing, and I adored the last scenes.

Great job!

Emily

I LOVE this! Please don't stop righting it, it is amazing 3

Tht is so cute. I love the last line. I hope there is another chapter I luv like minds and nigel

This was very intriguing. I liked the emotions and descriptions in the story.

But I sort of wished that you introduced your OC more, her name isn't even mentioned at least once. A little detail on how she's involved in the story would've made it better. Just some constructive criticism.