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Mariel3 5/2/03 . chapter 13
Just found and read this story. It's wonderful. Well written, perfectly paced, I'm very glad I wasn't one of those people who waited a whole year to read the entire thing!

I sincerely hope this isn't your last CSI story. You did an excellent job of weaving a case file and character development into a very moving, insightful work. Thank you!
Ryoko45 4/19/03 . chapter 4
I haven't completely finished my read of this story, but I wanted to compliment you on your descriptions of settings - you paint a very good picture of the surroundings.
Duckfeat 4/17/03 . chapter 13
This is so awesome. I am thrilled that you finished the story. You're such a good writer. Please give us more.
thousand-miles 4/17/03 . chapter 13
Just a great anding to a great fic. It was a heavy chapter but a good one. I think you handeled it great. It was also a very strong chapter and also very in caracter. I loved this fic...It was just great!

Geena
Grissom's Girl 4/17/03 . chapter 13
Well, I have to say this chapter was worth the wait. A perfect ending for a wonderful fic. I love how you ended everything up - tied up all the loose ends and answered all our questions.

"I walk through cemeteries." LOL I LOVED that part... perfect! And it fits very well with the Sara I've seen on the show these past 3 years - the Sara that I adore. And it shows how very much like Gil "I ride rollercoasters" Grissom she is.

All in all, this is just about the best fanfic I've ever read. Thank you.
wyldheart 4/16/03 . chapter 13
Wow... that was absolutely fantastic. I just read it all today, but you did an amazing job. You got the characters down perfectly. Too Tough to Die is one of my favorite episodes of CSI, and this fanfic fit right in with that storyline. :)
starcompass 4/16/03 . chapter 1
I found this fic compelling.

Characterizations for all characters, except Nick, were pretty much in their place. Although I personally think that Nick would not be quite as unmoved in the situation as this fic showed him to be. But otherwise, it was well written, and even the CSI jargon was used properly.

And personally? I'm a N/S shipper, but I did continue reading this fic, so you could assume that I probably liked it. :)

I liked the tie-in with the watch, as well.
Duckfeat 1/10/03 . chapter 12
This is one of my favorite stories. I'm so glad you updated. Awesome chapter. Dialogue is spot on. Can't wait for more. You did leave us hanging a bit, huh?
Jane Doe 1/9/03 . chapter 12
Well you've managed to keep us on the edge AGAIN! Very good writing to say the least. I liked the detailed description of Sara's place. It gave Sara more of a personality that accompanys a home. I can only dream about what the scream is about! I really cannot wait until you dazzle us with your writing skills once again.

Jane
thousand-miles 1/9/03 . chapter 12
Really, how cruel are you. Leaving us with a NOOOO? I was sooo happy you updated this one. I find this fic sooo exciting!

Geena
Annbitter42 1/9/03 . chapter 12
Awesome chapter! So, glad you updated! I have loved this story FOREVER(well, maybe it just seemss like forever! ; ) ) Can't wait for the next chapter!
irismoon 12/3/02 . chapter 1
Great story!
thousand-miles 11/20/02 . chapter 11
Love this fic. Are you going to continue with this? I'm Geena from the CSI Grissom and Sara yahoo group. I was the one who had a question about this fic. I would love to read more of it.

Geena
Duckfeat 11/10/02 . chapter 11
Awesome. Great story with believable dialogue and behaviors. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
JadeFox 10/13/02 . chapter 1
Great fic. I like the background your'e giving a little at a time. Keep going it's excellent.
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