your writing was so beautiful and sad that it brought tears to my eyes. Despite the sad ending, her death seemed beautiful due to your writing.

can't wait to read more!:)

this made me cry...too close

This is something that we all try to convey,a sense of realism but also the are one of the greats because I have no idea if you're describing Bella's descent into insanity or Edward's unrelenting devotion which is driving her to this dark part of her devotion.

Your voice in this story kinda reminded me of the one in Neon Moon, by nosleep3. Read it, I think you of all writers would like it and get it. I'm not a crier, especially not for the written word, but there are been a few exceptions (not Twilight), this story and neon moon have been the only two in fandom.

Very awesome. Very creepy too. But still lovely!

Wow

Dark

I love this in ways you will never know...

And, yes, I love the dark-minded fuckery. Especially yours.

awesome

Soooo good! You should definitly write more of this stuff.. One of the best fanfictionstories I've read, and I've read a lot...

Shit. That was dark. And amazing. You are an amazing writer.

Love it! The style reminds me (quite a bit) of the Weetzie Bat books by Francisca Lia Block. I don't know if that's intentional or not. Either way, I like it!

*blinks* cue epic fangirling. Dark mind-fuckery is right, but I loved it. (That probably says a lot about me doesn't it?) I'm not even sure what to say about this really, I don't have your eloquence. Suffice to say that it was truly amazing.

This was a dark poem with a twist of lemon. Dude... I have no words. Lots of fangirling and stuff because I loved the hell out of this.

BellaFlan xoxo

PS - there's a chance you're the most innovative writer in the entire fandom.

Good story, very sad.

AG was 100% correct when she described this as dary mindfuckery. I am pretty sure that she probably had beautiful or eloquent in there as well.