please continue!

love it

Wow, I love the way you made them confess their feelings, it's so romantic. Keep up the good work :D.

Nice story. Keep up the good work.

Very nicely done. Though i do find it hard to visualize Coran requesting Keith to sleep in Allura's room, it all played out very well. For as i thought about it, i could see it, with his concern of Allura's supposed death and the turmoil he must have been in. Either way, great story.

Aw, how cute! I especially liked how you put King Alfor in the story, it is nice to see how he reacts to his duaghter's behavior.