this was an interesting story and ended in a rather cute and sad way. did you spell merry christmas wrong on purpose if so i think a side note should be there to make it clear to other readers, other than that pretty good for a random thought

so good. keep it up. so sad.

Oh wow. That was so depressing! *sob* I love angsty stuff and this was defintiely good. Definetely. Anyway, I'm off to read the rest of your fics!
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i will kill if idont read more soon it was that good

Awwwww, how sad...*sniffs*...Poor Ash...Poor Misty...

;-; They both died... ;-; It was so sad... I agree with E2K, translate and post! or even just post a link...

Sadness... I love angst... I think it's a bit OOC, and there were a few spelling mistakes, but other than that it was...sad...and...angsty...and...stuff... (Yes, I'm very zoned out at the moment) In short, I like it! (o ; o) Keep up the angst pokémon writing! BTW, is it normal to kill off any character you feel affection for? Because I do it all the time... Heh heh. See ya around if you write more angst pokémon stuff!

*o_o*;;; ...damn...they...they're dead...*blinks*...*whimpers*...wah...I'm sad now...*;-.-;* Poor guys...Poor Ash...and and...that was nice...the fic...bad stuff happened, but...good, good fic type thing... :( Ummm...Tat's all...*;-.-;*

Hey, that was really good- and not just because Ash died!

Write more depressing stuff like that! I wanna read more!

*Still sobbing* Finally! The angst! I love this! I love sad stories! But...Ash died! WWWWWWWWWAAAAAAHHH! Note to self: Never ask people not kill Ash because she does it herself. It took me too much time to understand how can a person die by cutting thier wrist. Until I remembered that there's this vein there... A few spelling mistakes, but I'll forgive you for that. After all, I finally got my long-promised angst! *.* Ash is reunited with his dad...But why didn't you say how he died? The muse parts were funny- Nice cheer up! I was in them! It was so me! Wa...too many exclamation marks in the review... Anyway, it was a great fic. I think I'll add it to mt fav list. One (or few) last thing(s): I think you should translate it and put it you-know-where (tapuz). Remember the fic I promised to type if you'll write the angst? Well, I'll go type it! I Expect more pokefics from you!

Your's forever- Your match soul. LOL!