Oh ma goodnesss! this is a really great story, and i liked what you made out of tonks' clumsiness :D I hope you're planning on continuing this story because it is amazingly written and it's such a great idea :D

So far, I really like this story-it's a well-written, and well-thought out plot! I have one question, though: Why would Arthur have harbored bad feelings about Harry in the past?

So I started to re-read this yesterday and I must say it was a great story I can't wait for an update!

Yay apprenticeships! I looooooove apprenticeships!

Oh! So is Harry going to use his newfound awesomeness to sever Snape's dark mark from his magical core? Maybe find a way to extract Moony? This fic is addictive! I swear I didn't get a thing done in school today. Got to love smart phones ^_^ Please please pretty please update soon! I'd rather have the chapter than spend my spare time daydreaming up possibilities. :D

luvs and hugs,

kenzie

Sorry to be reviewing too late to make it a Christmas present as you requested. Got a birthday coming soon? If so, then this is a happy birthday review. This fic is addictive. All the way through it there have been twists etc that keep one reading and wanting more.

Harry as Master of Death is an exciting concept. You have me wondering what he will do with that power.

BTW there was a typo here I think: '...and Harry felt his spirits sour as he realised that they were another Horcrux down.'

I think 'sour' should be 'soar' - which changes the meaning somewhat LOL.

This is an exceptionally good and entertaining ficv. Thanks so much - I think, though I'm not sure I should thank you for causing me to stay up reading until 2.30 in the morning. LOL

BTW, it seems that you do not yet have a beta reader, or if you do then he or she is not catching some of your mistakes of grammar, in particular your problems with the verb 'to breathe' ( eg.versus the noun 'breath')and the verb 'to sit'. If you would like me to beta for you please PM me.

Great Great story! Brilliant in fact. I look forward to the next installment

Wow, so would the curse have been placed on Tonks as a baby? I would guess that seeing as that she's over 20 and not dead (What I'm guessing what would have happened if Andromeda had it). Waiting for more, as always!

I love this story. I hope you add to it soon.

This is great. please go on

This is great. please go on

Your Harry just never catches a break, dose he? He was still recovering from magical exhaustion when he gets attacked.

I just found your story yesterday, so I will now proceed to ramble about everything all in one review.

I love your Hogwarts, and the way the wards seem to respond to people. The fact that is seems to be pseudo-aware is awesome. Harry's interest in warding is really cool. I think that would be a really good practical application of his attunement gift that he would enjoy too. Oh and I love his attunement gift. Lots of stories have him sense magic, but I have never seen anyone have him discover it by tuning in to the rhythm of potion making. It makes perfect sense to me that potion making would have a rhythm. That is such a cool and original idea.

I am glad Draco is waking up. I would be interested in seeing who Draco develops into, and how he related to Harry and Severus, I can completely see Severus stepping into the role of father figure for Draco, and Harry being his brother/best friend, and that would be awesome (or they could fall in love. I completely approve of HPDM, it just doesn't seem to be leaning that way right now.)

I love that they got around the ministry by having Severus take Harry as his apprentice. And all of Harry's friends (both old and new) are so completely awesome in this story.

Alright, that's all I can remember to say right now.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing this story!

Someone

Wow... this story is bloody brilliant!

I am absoulutely in love with this story and i think it may be one of the best i've read in a long while!

:) :)

You are an amazing author! Please keep coming with the updates!

:P

~Megan

OMG what a story, just found this one from another writers favorite story list. Can't wait to see what comes next, (Harry curing both Remus and Severus) sure hope Draco is going to be ok (and maybe they take him with them on spring break) Good think those DA members called it early to return to there dorms or more students could have been hurt. I'm sure that the aurors were a little shocked to see those students practicing and doing a fine job of protecting each other.