|Reviews for By the Time I Get to Phoenix|
| verenicyliubvi 5/1/10 . chapter 1
Very good plot. I like the way you did your Liet, even if it deviates from Himaruya's. Overall, a wonderful story. I have only one true criticism: There is no true need to end 90% of Russia's sentences with the Russian word for "yes". "Da" is not synonymous to China's "aru", hon. But, once again, fabulous plot and characters. In fact, I even like your America x Russia even though I'm not usually into the pairing at all. Lovely work.
| Josephine Falnor 4/26/10 . chapter 1
I really do love this story. I think you did a great job, especially with making America more of an anti-hero, and with making Lithuania more powerful, despite how he was the victim before.
Also, I think the last sentance is great, about Russia having to play hero and victim. It really does work with his character, since Russia is powerful and large, while still being weak and needing help.
Also, yay for being able to link this to something historic!