oh, intrestiong so far! I can't wait to see what appens next. PLease update soonso that I may know what happened! Please?

wow intesting story plz update soon

hey this is a good story. try up dating. it'd make me happy at least :-D

Hay its good write more soon k?

Hmm... Interesting to say the least. I must admit, this doesn't quite seem like a Kaiken... It's more like an Osaken... Not that I'm complaining... Other than that, this could turn out to be a really good fic. Keep up the good work... I hope I'll get to see the rest of this fic soon...

Emu: *walks in with a big trench coat* Tis good. You should continue. Oh, and you never saw me. NEVER! *covers mouth* Whoops. *Shrugs and wanders off*

This is really good. Please contiue. _