Tsk Tsk Natsume is one sick guy :P yet still a hottie and awesome. LOL

pretty good! very good story

SO sweeeeet!

"I don't own Gakuen Alice. If I do, Ruka would be the lead star and he'd have rock-hard abs. ;)" - This gave me a good laugh. XD Ruka with rock-hard abs, I can't even. OTL XD

Anything with a fairytale and a happily-ever-after just catches my attention. It was simple and sweet, like how their love is supposed to be. :)

Signed,

EzMouse

OOC but definetely love the setting. :)

cute! _

nice but eww

Hey youuu :D

Omg. Wow. I loved this! I know this is rather mean to say but I hadnt actually read much of your stories in the past! And now I'm SO happy I've discovered them - THIS story was incredible! Simple, sweet, and totally worth my time! I loved it, I loved it, I loved it!

I don't know why but I love how you mention Natsume's adam apple in it. It makes him seem so much human! Loved it, it was fantastic! Expect many more reviews in your different stories to come your way in the future!

Lots of love,

a very happy Leenoy!

I borrowed a quote from your fanfiction :D in facebook.
Hope u dont mind :)

aw..sweet!

Yes... And life's just like that.

Yay for Perverts :) Very cute story

Rin-chan!
One Word: "Cool"
The storyline is, cool.
But not the part where they actually did 'it'!
I don't find that cool at all. haha...Kidding..:P
But I like the part when Natsume pointed out that there are no happily-ever-afters.
It's just so true. And I'll find it weirder if Natsume was the one who actually believe in them. EPIC. :))
Well, it was a bit cheesy-gushy-mushy. You know what I mean, but it's fine. It suits him, or them I mean. :))

Hi Fae!

Its been a while since I reviewed a story of yours so here it goes:

I agree with your notes before the actual story. It has no real plot. It sends readers straight toward a scenario with little to no explanation to the event. For me, I always feel the need for a reason with regards to scenarios. However, I'm not saying that this story is bad. Its still good in a strange yet interesting way.

Grammar errors (do I have to say it? :) ) are still present, though reduced.

As for the conclusion, I found it 50-50 meaning it is a good end but something better can be placed in that point.

Overall, I think its a weird yet interesting read. I REALLY liked the bit where Natsume stated that fairy tales are not what they seem. I definitely agree with that. Problems and dilemmas are not something that will disappear with a kiss or a prince charming. Anyway, I still enjoyed this work.

P.S.

Heard from your mom that you're in the province. Stay safe and enjoy your summer, okay? Haha. TCA.. _

You said in your Author's Note: Usui Takumi. Haha. I love him. I love your story, too! :D