 Mordanyes 11/20/09 . chapter 6This is a great story! I have a few ideas. Next you could have a chapter back with the Scoobies with more problems appearing couple and otherwise. Then another chapter with AI when they are visiting Doyle. That's all I have for now. |
 ideas 6/17/04 . chapter 6 doyal and buffy become inseperable angeland cordy get jealous |
 ideas 6/17/04 . chapter 6 doyal and buffy become inseperable angeland cordy get jealous |
 Mary 2/17/02 . chapter 6 PLEASE finish the story!
-M |
 Dulcea 2/16/02 . chapter 6how does willows spell sopost to get B/A together? |
 Tigerwolf 2/13/02 . chapter 5 Please make the chapters longer. I like the story, but the length is really annoying. Post an update soon, unlike Angel, we can't wait forever! |
 Dr. Tamwe 2/11/02 . chapter 5Decent writing. The story has potential, especially from the old-school 'shipper point of view, but the chapters are awfully short. If this got to be very long, that could become a hindrance to the reader. I do want to read more though :) |
 Nyxie 2/11/02 . chapter 5 I can't wait to see what happens. Please continue! |
 Jen 2/9/02 . chapter 5 great story! please post the next chapter soon! |