Wicked story! yeah, ditch the accent other wise-TOTALLY awesome! i was thinking of bring doyle back in a story, but i still hadn't gotten around to it! he's my favourite character ever! and he's GONE! oh well. as for your next chapter...hmmm...you could have spike and buffy having sex, and have angel see them! haha - that'd be funny. joss whedon needs to realize that them getting caught together is going to be FUNNY! yeah. oh! and get cordy and doyle gotta get talking- esp. about that KISS. oh yeah, and how come doyle has his visions back? he gave them to cordy? can you explain that? does she still have them. e-mail me with info, and we can talk about ideas. **

Ummm..ahhh... just wite more and make it Spuffy!

Very interesting... this fic has a lot of potential, and I am frankly eager to see it continued! Please go on ... PLEASE ! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS GREAT STORY ! ! I think that I’m going fucking crazy … it’s been a hell of a long time ago since you last updated this … please write more …

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Errm...was that meant to be an Irish accent you were typing? I wouldn't bother. Never really works if you do it the way you've tried to. Any fan of Buffy/Angel will know in their heads how the character sounds - and the way you've written Doyle sounds nothing at all like he did on the show.

Could be a bit better if you sorted it out...

i love it*squeals*...more please