Oh I absolutely loved it. I had a feeling it would be about dragon's when I read the summary and saw the characters. The storyline was excellent and your writing style is very easy to understand. I liked the ending in particular, it was extremely well done. Great Work!

That was so sad. :( Took me a moment to realise that it was Norbert, I'd forgotten that he was actually a she.

It was so perfectly written, the last line brought tears to my eyes.

Oh Merlin that was great, I love Norbet and Hagrid and Charlie :) I must say this is the first story of its kind I have read. Amazing and new. Love it.

Awww...so sad. You wrote Hagrid very well, his 'accent' wasn't overdone at all. Great job.

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Sad fic.

Sad, sad fic about Norberta.

I always loved anyone who could do a 'Hagrid' dialogue..

I really liked this fic.

Norberta! How sad! Hagrid would be really torn up about it! I think you wrote it very well! How Charlie was depressed. How Norberta was going to die. Everything is sooo sad! GOod writing though! Nice work with your prompt! It fit in nicely!

Aww this was so sad. Poor Norbert(a). I loved this story and you did a great job with Hagrid!

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Oh that was so sweetly done and so sad! I love the idea that Charlie said that, and I love how Hagrid was there. This was a really nicely done fic, and the emotion in it really came through.

That was very well written and deeply moving. It's an original idea and your use of the prompt was excellent. I loved your characterisation of Charlie, because you managed to convey a strong respect for & understanding of nature in so few words. It was a fantastic story. Well done.

Aww...poor Norberta! That's a great way to use the 'she was mine to look after before she was yours' prompt. I love your originality. I like how you portray Charlie and Hagrid. You make them canon, yet your own. Good job!

The concept of "His First" itself is quite unique - I've never seen it done before. Points for originality, and additional points for execution. It's a sweet story. D

I loved the last line especially. Also, how you allowed Hagrid to be the last one Nobert/a was really heart-warming, yet tragic. :)

Oh, god, this was beautiful. It was perfect and heart-breaking and I loved the look at Charlie, because he is simply fascinating, and the return of Norbert. I never thought I'd see him/her again, and especially not in such a tragic way. But you made it work and made it sublime and I am in awe at your wonderfulness.

Please don't die, Ms Norbert :(

Oh, I loved this. It was so sweet and sad. I really liked the way you worked the quote in and I felt so bad for Charlie and Hagrid.

My vocabulary seems only capable of a massive "Aw" and "Sniff Sniff" - Once again, beautifully written!