Hey this is a great start. Are you going to continue with this? Or was this just a one shot?

wow. THAT. WAS. AWESOME. you are an AMZINGLY gifted writer, first of all, and second of all I LOVE YOU DOCTOR ARMSTRONG! yea, I kinda hoped Vera and one of the guys would...y'know ...get together... :D and I really did think that Vera and Lombard would, when they were like together while Blore went to go get some breakfest at the end of the book...anyways...GREAT JOB

Excellent story! I really enjoyed that book and your take on that part is great! I would love it if you would read my stories and tell me what you think! :D PS. I am subscribing 2 you!

Quite interesting. I never thought of Armstrong and Vera before, and I like your unique approach to it. One little detail I appreciate is adding in the narration how the coat on Vera was Lombard's; it sounded like a tone of jealousy on Armstrong's part.