That was cute. *smile*

I loved it. If you would post another chapter, I would be in line to read it. You missed capitalizing one thing, but other than that I loved it!

I really liked this story. Are you going to post more Hannah Swensen stories like this one with chapters? I liked the series too but haven't read them lately. I liked both Norman and Mike but couldn't decide who I liked better. Did she work at the Cookie Jar in this story too?

I think this is very romantic. Norman is such a good man, she made a right choice. I love this story.

I love these books! I do think Hannah should pick Norman. He's better for her than Mike.

I thought you did really well. Like Scarlet, I loved how you compared Norman with cookies and milk. I think he's so much better for Hannah, so I may be a little biased, but I absolutely loved the ending! You and your story rock!

I have no idea what these Hannah Sweson mysteries are, but I felt like I knew the characters after I read your story…that should hint at the fact that this one-shot is amazing!

Here are some of my favorite lines:

“Norman was like cookies and milk.” That’s adorable to compare him to something nostalgic like that!

“I didn't dream that night, in fact, it is sometimes hard for me to sleep. I know why. It's Dr. Seuss says, "You know you're in love when reality is finally better than your dreams." And it's true. Reality is finally better than my dreams…” The message is so simple, but lovely. I loved that line and I think it really wrapped up a great story!

Really, really, really awesome!

Scarlet